Peer Review 6 Week 9

Link to blog post: https://jesseshakespeare.wordpress.com/2017/05/08/seventh-19th-century-literature-blog-post-week-10-monday-8th-of-may/

Jesse, I thought your blog post this week was very thought-provoking and interesting. I, too agree with the idea that George Elliot uses the Characters in Silas Marner as a way of critiquing the value of material wealth in comparison to true wealth, in which Silas finds in his relationship with Eppie. The inclusion of your discovery of Shakespearean literature was fascinating and something I am yet to experience. One thing I would suggest is proof-reading your blog post before publishing as there were a couple of typos and grammatical errors which could have easily been prevented, specifically the capitalisation of proper nouns such as Silas Marner in the first line and Shakespeare in the last paragraph. Aside from this, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your blog post this week. Well done!

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  1. An excellent peer review Alina, but be brave and point out more specifically those grammatical errors you detected. This would be helpful and useful. Most people can’t see their own grammatical errors (even me!).
    MG
    *Please attend to editing your work carefully. Here is what I have picked up:
    *in comparison to true wealth, in which Silas finds in his relationship with Eppie.= in comparison to true wealth, which Silas finds in his relationship with Eppie.

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