Peer Review 5 Week 8

Link to blog post: https://daniellegattlit.wordpress.com/2017/04/16/adventure-into-the-gallery/

Danielle, I thought your explanation of the art gallery visit was interesting and well written, and I felt like your description of the two paintings brought them to life and captured the essence of the artworks well. I too thought ‘the widower’ by Sir Luke Fildes was a standout in the gallery and found myself agreeing with your description of the piece. While it is ‘bleak in colour and void of joy’ it really is beautiful in the way that it captures the hardship and struggles of this family. There were a couple of grammatical errors for example standout is one word, and a there needed to be a comma after glance and feet, but those are just minor issues in a well- written and engaging blog post. Can’t wait to read more from you. Well done!

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